Lune 1.2

Reviews

5 ★, on 2020-01-09
A gem of a visual novel that's a little rough around the edges. The core of it is good: choices that change your experience alongside a compelling story. That said, some technical features are missing or unpolished, including the inability to skip over previously read text, and audio that will sometimes cut off abruptly. Overall, these minor issues only slightly hinder what is ultimately an interesting little visual novel.

4 ★, on 2019-11-26
The overall atmosphere and art is nicely done and I think the script is pretty good. I am not very interested in the sci-fi genre, so I don't think I'll finish, but I think someone into that sort of thing would enjoy the story. I am familiar with visual novels, so I wasn't bothered by the slow burn gameplay. -spoiler ahead- The battle with the alien was pretty fun and unexpected though!

3 ★, on 2019-11-21
Nice art style, very retro story progression style (Chat boxs, etc), but it's very BORING. I didn't even make it past the introduction of the characters, there is nothing interesting to actually grab our attention and give us a reason to actually pay attention and get past the scenes. Also it's very repetitive with lack of detail. The character development is bad and we could've used a backstory. I understand this is a game developed as part of a youth education program so keep it up. :)

5 ★, on 2020-01-15
I like visual novels and this one is short, but still good. I liked making decisions to align myself with the machines or with humans. Nice job for your first app. One weird thing is after the first alien fight, the main character had a face panel missing, but then in the last Act, their face was fine again.

3 ★, on 2019-12-17
The story was very interesting and had good graphics to go with it. My main complaint is that it isn't a game at all, more of a graphic novel. This is especially true because of the "illusion of choice", meaning that even though you are sometimes presented with different options, the outcome of your choice is rarely different. Sometimes the NPCs say the exact same thing, regardless of what you choose. I think it could be improved just by adding different dialogue for each choice.

3 ★, on 2020-01-15
Cute game for a first game but way too much reading and not enough action. Can't pick all the choices to learn more about what's going on. I got outside the ship and met the first person and just lost interest. For a first game it runs smooth and the graphics are nice. So 3 stars for the effort. Keep doing this. Someday you may make the next million copies sold game for PS or pc or Xbox or all 3.