The Alder: A CYOA Fantasy Choices RPG 1.9

Reviews

4 ★, on 2020-08-13
While I'm totally fine with ads since they help support the dev, when I'm trying to read and there is a Moving animated ad at the bottom, I I can't focus on the text. pleasechsnge the ad banner to a non moving ad so I can enjoy the story. Ithanks

3 ★, on 2020-08-25
Well written but buggy. Tried plating through twice and both times i'd get so far to be jumped back to earlier in the story as if i'd mad a different choice. Kinda loops in on itself.

4 ★, on 2020-04-29
The game is amazing except for the fact that it's way too short. Just when I thought that I was getting to the good part the game said that the story was finished which was quite disappointing. Also, adding a settings or menu button with an option to start a new game would be helpful.

2 ★, on 2019-07-25
Great game, but I have a few issues with.First of all, it's VERY short. The longest path I could find was around 40, maybe 50 pages in a real book, making it readable within half an hour or so. Second of all, the story ends way too suddenly. It just randomly ends without a reason, whatsoever. Wouldn't recommend installing it unless there are furher books/parts released. It just makes you want to read more of it, when you can, and it honestly isn't worth it for a few minutes of entertainment.

4 ★, on 2019-07-09
There is an issue with the first mission. I chose to retreat back to the temple, but the story went the other direction. At first I thought I pressed the wrong option by mistake. Then, after destroying the city, I went to talk to my grandfather and suddenly it went back to the path that I would've chosen (retreating). This sours the experience immediately. I do hope this issue will be addressed.

3 ★, on 2019-09-03
Meh, it was ok overall but short. There is one big forced decision I noticed while reading through the second time, and I see other people mentioning the same thing. The story also ends on a cliff hanger like there should be a chapter 3 but the writer got bored of writing. I would happily increase my rating with more chapters, I love the universe this book starts to build, but it's just too short. I don't want to be an advertisement, but if you want a really long story you should try Magium.